Rate My Rap Lyrics! What Do You Think?
Question by MC-Double-UK: Rate my rap lyrics! What do you think?
The working titile for this rap is “Hip Hop State of Mind”. Here it is:
My IPOD on, my head is noddin’ to hypnotic thumpin’ beats
I’d spit some bars with a mystique with head that’s bobbin’ consciously
By takin’ walks along a street I’d simply rap ’bout what I see…
From dogs that pee on properties to cherry blossoms on the trees
And now I saunter down a street, a boulevard that’s full of cars
At moments I just froze in awe at building walls like full of art
It’s skills and heart that’s spilled right onto all these walls, I’m still in awe
It shows us all the repertoire of all the artists—you know they’re stars!
And down a block some people flock to watch some breakdancers with moves
They’d gravitate to every move, they’re entertainin’—that’s the truth!
They’re entertainin’ adults, youths, in public places, avenues
With masses ravin’ at their moves, and plus they’re ravin’ at the tunes
When I’m concentratin’ on a tune I would actually beatbox to the rhythm
When I start to beatbox to the rhythm, I would actually beatbox with a vision…
As a rap MC that’s impartin’ wisdom, you can actually see when I’m actually spittin’…
I have mass conviction, rap addiction, you can probably see’s it’s not crack addiction
It’s a fact not fiction, yeah I’m diggin’ awesome DJ’s spinnin’ tracks
From like reggae beats to like hip hop, jazz, to R & B music and trance
In the clubs or any main events, the eclectic beats would just make ya gasp…
Or just make ya chant or just make ya dance, or just have some people think romance
I’m-a hit the masses with this fact: “I spit my raps to share some knowledge!”
I ain’t spittin’ cash or cars or drugs, I ain’t spittin’ trash or careless garbage
I’m not really rap’s most gifted artist, and I’m really that sincere an artist
But I’m lovin’ hip hop as a culture, it’s a fact that: “HIP HOP’S WHERE MY HEART IS!”
(Where my heart is!)
(Where my heart is!)
-Any suggestions in terms of an alternative title to this rap?
Best answer:
Answer by Nick
6/10
Answer by Drake Haven
Fix this…
From dogs that pee on properties
Then it’s decent….
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